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Pull me up,
Pull me under.
Leave me be,
Leave me thunder.

How you care,
please don't say.
I'm feeling fine,
now I'm oke.

I know you see,
I know you do.
But trust me please,
I'm fine.
©2005-2009 ~Liliath
:iconliliath:

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I made this in my German class today, it's a fraction of how I feel like the last couple of months.

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:iconaislin-sedai:
Beautiful.. I think that I know what you mean..

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Caught between what happened and what could never be
:iconelyonsheep:
I'm really bad at understanding poetry but this one I do...
It's wonderfull, really it's awsum! ;)

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What would touch me deeper
Tears that fall from eyes
That only cry?
Would it touch you deeper
Than tears that fall from eyes
That know why?

~ Dream Theater - Tears
:iconemosickness:
like it... jup

And still... that leave me be... it's in a song... but which?

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may the glimjas be with y'all
:iconliliath:
I have know idea ^^ .... The song Leave me Be?

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Kumagurou Beam!! *nittle grasper rules the world!*
:iconemosickness:
so smart...

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may the glimjas be with y'all
:iconmerenwen-malfoy:
(yes it's in a song, Nightwish - Romanticide. "Leaave me beeee and ceaaaase to teeeell meeee hoow tooo feeeel" )

But it's beautiful. (continues in Dutch) Het zijn zegmaar van die korte zinnen die heel goed op elkaar aansluiten en das echt mooi :)

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to find the time is to lose the momentum
:iconthe-writer-who-knows:
we all feel like that at times eh?
and yet when we do it seems like we need someone more than needing to be alone
oops if its a double send

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Forever We Struggle
Forever We Try
Forever. . .Man thats a long time. . .

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